Once Upon A Dream

I step outside Into the still bright twilight The air with a bit of chill, beginning to descend And starting to turn crisp. I breathe deeply, and look to the ...

Either Savannah, GA, or Boston, MA.

I absolutely LOVE the new song, and I totally can't wait for the new CD. I heard short previews of all the songs in the audio interview that's on iTunes, ...

Snip Snip-Thanks for your comments! Black-Hmmmm...I found your comments especially interesting. The "who is the narrator talking to" question is something I hadn't thought about, but it did make me ...

Based on a fantasy book I'm writing...let me know what you think. In the fear, I seek you In my strength, I find you In the dark, I see you ...

Yeah...I see what you mean. It's kind of a "you had to be there" poem. This is a rather personal piece for me, so I'm not really interested in elaborating ...

Fluorescent lit classroom The dim, cheap light Bouncing off the rug and walls All the desks are packed away for the summer. I followed you for a reason And it’s ...

The rhyme scheme sounds forced most of the time. I think this could also be made more emotional by expanding on your thoughts and the emotions you want to express. ...

I can act so kind, genial And docile When I know Something’s not right here, and This is wrong, Pretending I’m over it Has been working so far But deep ...

Red Sam-Flyleaf

Great ideas presented here. The classic "it can't happen to me" illusion destroyed. Nicely done. My only suggestion would be to smooth out the flow a little, especially in the ...

I agree, I didn't like the rhyme scheme at all. I'm not a fan of the AABB scheme in general, as more often than not it sounds sing-songy and nursery ...

Wrote this a while ago, and it's still not how I want it, even though I've had a couple of go's at it revision wise...and critique or comments would be ...

I've actually never read those books, but the movies look pretty cool. I don't know if I would miss stuff since I never read it, though. I'll probably wait for ...

Teh ULTIMATE playlist: My Chemical Romance-Thank You for the Venom Evanescence-Anything for You Flyleaf-So I Thought Evanescence-Thoughtless (Korn cover) My Chemical Romance-Hang Em High Fall Out Boy-